Seraph of the End

Something that I never considered when I started reviewing manga as a hobby was how much it would change how I enjoy manga. When reading manga I suddenly realized that I was not just allowed to have an opinion, but in order to have a proper review I was expected to have an opinion. Just saying “It left no impression on me whatsoever” could only work once before I had to elaborate. It was then that I realized forming an opinion out of necessity is a lot harder than a naturally grown opinion. One is pure and from the heart, the other can become a cynical exercise of no value to anyone if I allowed laziness to trick me into reaching for the low hanging opinions.

What I’m trying to say is that writing reviews is hard and you should all feel sorry for me. Whereby I hope you will forget that I’m several weeks behind in writing these reviews. Has it worked?

One Piece Ch. 750
If nothing else the return of One Piece to Weekly Shonen Jump is as good a reason as any to start writing again. While I was expecting a flashback after the cliffhanger two weeks ago, I have to say a little bit of setting the scene before the flashback never hurt anyone. The chapter jumps around, giving us just a couple pages each for the characters in the arc, making it hard to really focus on any one element.

Though I will say that Rebecca’s reunion with her aunt was just perfectly adorable. Now would someone please get that poor girl some clothes?

King Riku’s distrust of the Strawhats somewhat comes out of nowhere, he was okay with a former street punk marrying his daughter, but doesn’t trust the people that helped him remember who said former street punk son-in-law of his is? Seems a bit disingenuous and out of place all things considered. It does allow Oda to fit in a monologue about the evils of injust social elites but as a favorite writer of mine says, “Story first, then message” and it seems beneath Oda to insert a character trait on a character that has not shown any signs of said trait before just to bring across a message.

If nothing else, Oda continues to show that he knows just how long to string us along before we get the big payoff. He’s clearly not rushing this story, and the Dressrossa arc is all the better for it.

Naruto Ch. 681
It’s probably good that I haven’t been reviewing Naruto for the past several weeks. Because I know for a fact that I would have made the promise to quit reading this series several times, and then would have to go back on said promise. Let’s keep things simple by saying that this climax is quite possibly the worst thing Kishimoto could have ever done. How anyone that knows even the slightest thing about writing could possibly defend making the final boss a character we only just learned about within the last couple months of a decade long series is beyond me. Madara being the big bad instead of someone like Orochimaru or Pein is a big enough stretch, but to suddenly have Kaguya, a character who I’m convinced was only created in Kishimoto’s mind this year, be the big bad is quite possibly the worst thing this series has ever done. And here I thought Naruto and Sasuke being the reincarnations of two characters we only just found out about a couple months ago was the worst thing that could happen. And Kaguya doesn’t even do us the courtesy of being an interesting character.

This series has gotten so convoluted that ever “twist” added on top of this burning, sinking wreckage just elicits another annoyed “Whatever” from me.

I used to just hate the characters, but now the writing is just as bad for Naruto. I am at my last wit’s end here. Someone, if any of you still exist, that likes this manga, please tell me why. I can’t get beyond how awful this plot is to even consider what good could possibly exist here.

Hunter X Hunter Ch. 344
I would review Hunter X Hunter, but let’s be fair besides the past couple chapters I’ve only reaad the first volume of this series. Until I catch up there is absolutely nothing important I could have to say about this series. Get back to me in a couple weeks when I’m hopefully caught up.

Though for the two page spread, I have to say it kind of reminds me of what the Toriko world would look like if it was drawn by Kentaro Miura.

Nisekoi Ch. 127
Funniest chapter in months. I really don’t feel like I need to say anything else. Just go read this one if you’re not reading the series. It stands alone well enough that you’ll get how the characters relate to each other, and the jokes will convince you to read it from the beginning.

Stealth Symphony Ch. 017
I really hate how modern manga publishing has ruined the stories. What we’ve got here is an interesting story that would actually work if the author had bothered to actually develop any of his characters. As it is we’re getting a plot that should not have been written until several years of publication. I see things happening, but I don’t care because none of these characters matter. I see focus given to quite possibly the most shameless example of fanservice that still apparently is supposed to be a serious character. For those of you that enjoyed Fullmetal Alchemist, imagine how Olivier Armstrong would have come across if she had walked around in a miniskirt with her top undone and her character design drawn by someone that seems to think that interesting characters must come with breasts that would make Kubo, Oda, and Mashima hold an intervention for him.

It’s the same problem you see with all new manga that just can’t get the rankings early on. They skip developing the characters and instead try to fit as much of the story that must have sounded amazing in their heads into their manga before getting cancelled. There really should be some kind of grace period that allows manga artists to actually develop their characters. Then they can start their plot and hope it attracts enough interest to not get cancelled.

Bleach Ch. 585
Ichigo didn’t even get a chance to look cool before he’s shown to have helped the big bad with his plan yet again. Either way, I enjoy having Ichigo back in the story so it annoys me that we’re going to get a bunch of the Soul Reapers facing off against the Stern Ritter. That’s totally what I was hoping for, more boring fights to distract from the fact that the main character doesn’t have an interesting character arc anymore.

One-Punch Man Ch. 035.2
I can’t really build up any enthusiasm for this series anymore. The art is gorgeous, but the story is laking and just not funny anymore. I came here for comedy, not another action series. Sure it’s a very well rendered action series. But we’re running into the problem of the invincible superman here. If you have an invincible hero you really need to find a better way to show tension rather than just have them beat their enemy easily. Like maybe make it a comedy series. That might work.

Sometimes the difference between mediocrity and perfection manga is just a single page. One perfect page can tip the scale from “good” to “brilliant”. Don’t know what I mean? Well let me show you.

Nisekoi Ch. 121
The hardest part of any harem series is legitimizing another romantic interest later on in the game. I’ve found that most other series either don’t bother, or half-heartedly do so. Nisekoi manages to show once again that it is at the top of the pack of harem series. Yui not only works as a legitimate romantic interest, she is characterized enough to the point where her addition to the cast improves the series rather than denigrating it. For an example of a new character later in the the game that does not improve the series look no further than the introduction of Haru.

Slowly we’re getting to the truth of what happened ten years ago, but as curious as I am to finally learn what actually happened, Nisekoi has been enjoyable enough that I would rather we don’t reveal the big mystery just yet, especially if it means the series continues for a couple more years.

All You Need Is Kill Ch. 014
I’m sure fans of coffee appreciated the opening of this chapter, but all I could really think about while Rita was going on about how good the coffee she has is, was how terrible the stuff smells to me. There are things other people enjoy that I don’t particularly care for, but I can understand why someone would like it. Coffee is not one of those things. It smells so bad that I can’t believe anyone actually likes it. Imagine if people went around grinding up rabbit pellets and making a drink out of them. That’s how I feel whenever someone goes on about how good coffee is. You’re all crazy.

It’s always fun to read characters of one’s own nationality when written by someone that does not share said nationality. For example, Americans in old british shows tend to be just a few steps away from an insulting stereotype. Conversely, seeing Americans written by manga authors is always good for a laugh. In this case Rita is probably one of the most realistic Americans in manga, but I have to chuckle at how often she expresses genuine interest or admiration for Japanese products and culture. I’m going to just come out and say it, most Americans would not go around complimenting Japanese glass. In fact we would be more likely to begrudgingly admit that the glass is adequate, and then extol the virtues of Made in the USA glass. We would then put on an American flag like a cape and ride a giant bald eagle into battle. Since we’re dealing in stereotypes here.

Needless to say, whenever an American character compliments Japanese craftsmanship I can’t help but feel like it’s a bit of wish fulfillment on the part of the author. “Look how great Japanese workmanship is, even Americans admit it.” Normally I wouldn’t point that out, but it’s so oddly out of place and not something that anyone I know would ever say so it pulls me out of the story just a little bit. And once I’m distracted no amount of alien monsters can bring me back.

Toriko Ch. 276
I hope eating creatures with human faces doesn’t become too common here. I know a lot of vegans refuse to eat anything with a face, while I don’t ascribe to that I do draw the line at anything that has a human face and can talk. Nonetheless, Toriko has managed to be about as bizarre as it has ever been with this first step into the gourmet world. So I think we can all look forward to an extended “Whaaaa…?” as my review every week.

Seraph of the End Ch 018
I like chapters where I learn something new. Seraph has the issue of having to fight against my initial impression, and while I still don’t care for the series I have found as of these most recent chapters that the characters are much more tolerable than before, and I’m slowly becoming interested in the series. Maybe it’s just me? I tend to hate the first several chapters of any new series in Jump, so maybe they’re actually just fine and I’m just a bitter, jaded jerk of a manga reviewer.

While that may possibly be true for other series, I stand by my conviction that Seraph of the End was not a good series. It’s interesting now, but I wouldn’t go so far as to say it’s a good series. The backstory intrigues me, but the characters only just manage to escape me hating them completely.

One Piece Ch. 746
This was the chapter I was talking about earlier when I said a single page can be the difference between a good chapter and a great chapter. In this case it’s actually two pages. The entirety of the chapter is awesome. But it’s those two pages where Doflamingo assigns the bounties that make this one of my favorite chapters in a long time. Which is fortunate, since this is still a bit of a setup chapter for the finale of the arc. It looks like we will be spending longer in Dressrossa than we thought, which works just fine for me, it’s been a good arc and I like a good long arc.

Naruto Ch. 675
Sometimes I feel silly for how much I can rant about manga that I hate. Then I remind myself that storytelling in any form matters to me, and played a big part of growing up for me. So to see something that is flagrantly doing a terrible job at telling a story kind of rubs me the wrong way. For example, it is bad writing if you have a character who has one sole purpose in the story, and to then give that character’s ability to someone else. I used to hate when people would hate on Sakura, but now I can’t help but agree. She has become completely useless, and it kinda pisses me off that Kishimoto has taken her one ability and made Naruto better at it. I’ve read a lot of manga that does a terrible job with its female cast, but Naruto somehow manages to be the worst at it while not being so flagrantly awful. Sure the women aren’t constantly damsels in distress, but they also contribute nothing useful to the story. Cut Sakura out and the story doesn’t change one bit. Except that I wouldn’t spend so much time getting angry at what is apparently meant to be a touching love story between her and Sasuke but in reality is a terrifying example of how abusive relationships start.

I’ve never understood how Kishimoto could ever seriously want to pair Sasuke and Sakura up. From the very beginning he has been portrayed as the kind of character that would grow up to be abusive at best. And yet even the fact that he tried to murder her is just used as a sign of how “devoted” she is. Sakura has been universally reviled for her selfish crush throughout a good chunk of the readership. It doesn’t help her one bit to suddenly say “she is so devoted” without actually showing how she is any different now than she was ten years ago.

And to make matters worse, the entire climax is relying on a powerup that is based on a concept we only just knew existed in the Naruto world. Up until the past few months we never knew reincarnation was even a thing here, and suddenly the big bad is going to be defeated thanks to the sudden existence of reincarnation? That’s just bad writing! And I don’t see how anyone could possibly think it’s anything but. I’m not even being rhetorical here. I’m sincerely confused. Someone please tell me why this series is still so popular!

One-Punch Man Bonus Chapter
What can I say about this extra chapter? It really was to short for me to have any indepth opinion of it.

Bleach Ch. 579
Well, it was fun while it lasted. But I think we all knew that a fight with a character who could create anything he could imagine would not end well. And yet somehow I feel disappointed that his undoing was that he imagined Kenpachi’s power too well, but couldn’t imagine a stronger body for himself. There literally was no way the end of this fight wouldn’t be cheap, so I chose to remember it as a one of a kind fight, and then just forget the ending ever happened.

World Trigger Ch. 059
World Trigger has been quite good at portraying strategic combat. This chapter was as good as any of the past ones, but when too many chapters are good I find myself without anything that stands out enough to be commented on. So it was good, but not amazing. I enjoyed it, but don’t necessarily have anything to talk about. Though I will mention that we’re getting into the C List cast here and I can’t remember who any of these people are. Which goes to show that the manga can get me invested even in characters I can’t quite remember. And that’s just fine by me.

Stealth Symphony Ch. 011
I have to admit I’m intrigued. The ending of this chapter gave me that little extra something I needed for a mediocre series like Stealth Symphony to attract my attention. I’m certainly curious to see where the story will go from here, and am hoping that we go the unconventional route with this one. Though I have been noticing a worrisome trend where new characters are designed with maximum fanservice in mind. It’s rarely a good sign when a manga starts relying on that.

Blue Exorcist Ch. 057
I’m not the kind of person to cry “Sexism” at every little opportunity. I think that some people are a bit sensitive where that topic is concerned. But when a mangaka just comes out and says that a character needs saving because she is a girl, then I can’t help but nervously glance at the big red “Sexism Alert” button I’ve installed on my computer. The only thing stopping me from pressing it is because I’m too confused by the fact that the author of Blue Exorcist happens to be a woman. Does that still count as sexist? Is it even my place to say anything if a woman wants to say girls need saving? Or is this a case where I need to separate the author and the character more? Is Yukio just a sexist? Because if that’s the case I didn’t exactly need another reason to dislike him.

That aside, the fights are quite entertaining. Miwa managing to escape thanks to his brains is a lot more interesting than the “Hulk Smash!” style of shonen battles. And even Yukio incapacitating his foe thanks to the zombie’s regeneration being too aggressive was a lot of fun. So overall a good chapter, but the beginning distracts me with some very worrisome implications. Oh well, at least next month I get to look forward to a bazooka battle.

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If you like western themed fantasy then you really need to pick up The Seven Deadly Sins. The storytelling is very much in the style of other manga, but the aesthetic of the design is one hundred percent medieval european. Even the swords are styled properly, which for a manga artist must take an insane amount of self control not to insert any curved or katana styled swords in there.

That’s about it for my reading this week, I haven’t had much free time to read during so I haven’t had a chance to read anything new. Besides the latest chapters that is.

Naruto Ch. 671
I warned you Kishimoto. I warned you what would happen if you went the clichéd and tired route. That’s it. I’m done. Call me when the manga ends so I can see how much that is screwed up too.

Okay so not really, I’d really like to use this as an excuse to stop reading this manga forever, but the truth is that this is hardly the worst thing Naruto has ever done. Oh it’s terribly written, and a complete bore to boot. The truth is that Naruto long ago lost any chance it ever had for me to be invested. So to see a plot development like the one in this chapter doesn’t really make me angry as much as it just makes me shake my head and move on.

Basically my review comes down to this: Copy and paste my opinion from last week only this time double it.

Stealth Symphony Ch. 007
Again, I feel like I’m supposed to care about what’s happening, but the fact that I haven’t had any time to develop a connection to any of these characters before we start moving into a fight is pushing Stealth Symphony onto my naughty list. the few chapters that were meant to serve as our introduction to the characters just didn’t hack it because the characterization does not ever extend beyond basic tropes that manga authors keep repeating. So to see the manga try and focus on battles and spectacle gives me a bad vibe, suggesting that this manga will not last much longer.

One Piece Ch. 743
I imagine there are two things people are growing tired of in my writing, how often I dump on Naruto and how often I do the exact opposite for One Piece. The difference is that one tries to pass something the author thought of last week as an overarching thread, while One Piece manages to not only make a great spectacle, but also drop subtle hints suggesting how the story will progress. I dare not spoil anything, but in regards to the climax of this chapter, let us remember that not all is necessarily as it seems. This arc isn’t over yet.

World Trigger Ch. 055
I’d normally hate a series that has to stop and explain what is going on, rather than focusing on the action. But with World Trigger those short breaks in the action really help me appreciate the action a lot more. Would I appreciate what I’m seeing if I didn’t know that Tamakoma use a special kind of trigger? Probably not. And the flow of who has the advantage over whom really is handled quite expertly. While Border does seem to be at a disadvantage, there is still enough room to let the flow of battle ebb towards the side of our protagonists.

Bleach Ch. 575
Kenpachi is badass, do I really need to say anything else about this chapter? There really isn’t a plot worth speaking of, so I’ll just let the chapter speak for itself.

One-Punch Man Ch. 034.3
While I do have my reservations with One-Punch Man being a straight up action series, I do have to say that Saitama does make a good serious action lead. In that he’s completely not serious even when the battle seems to be going against him. There’s just a certain refreshing nonchalance to him that makes me wish more time was focused on him rather than the ancillary characters.

Nisekoi Ch. 117
Besides making me incredibly nervous about my recent stomach aches, this week’s Nisekoi is a perfectly told joke. One does not normally think of manga being structured in terms of a joke, but from the setup to the punchline this chapter just might have been perfect. Add in Marika being the best character ever and you have my favorite Nisekoi chapter since the short Ruri story we had a couple weeks ago.

All You Need Is Kill Ch. 011
Oh yeah, Keiji, he’s the main character isn’t he? I wouldn’t have thought we’d get any kind of emotional resonance with this series, but this chapter’s end was pretty well done, and worked well because the setup had been done properly through the last several chapters. I do ask myself how Rita can be uncertain of Keiji being trapped in a timeloop, but I suppose it makes sense if she herself is not caught in the same timeloop. She may have realized it during the battle, but in the morning she would have forgotten, which is why Keiji answering the question she was going to ask tomorrow is relevant.

Toriko Ch. 272
It was a nice little break to see all the characters from the manga’s past before we set off on the long arc that the gourmet world will be. I hope it won’t be too long before we see some of these characters again, because I would be really disappointed if we do not.

I also still stand by my opinion that Rin is being written as a beard for Toriko by Shimabukuro. “Please don’t mind that I’m leaving behind a hot woman who wants to marry me to go on a trip with four other guys.” Still, it’s refreshing that a shonen manga artist besides Toriyama actually has his main character discussing marriage, it seems so oddly absent from almost every other series I read, so this is a nice breath of fresh air and the source of many jokes for me.

Blue Exorcist Ch. 056
Dr Gedoin is an odd character, on the one hand he is too disgusting to keep around, but on the other hand he was moderately amusing this chapter, mostly because he is so clearly oblivious to how things will turn out that it’s almost endearing. Ignoring of course the lolicon vibes the guy gives off. And the fact that he’s clearly a misogynist. Can we please move away from him? But at least we get weird Frankensteinian zombies, which despite the fact that they are different from the ghouls we saw at the beginning of the series clearly resemble the ghouls at the beginning of the series. Hopefully the characters will realize next month that the doors in their cells have clearly been left open.

Special Bonus Story – Dragon Ball
When it comes to sharing my opinion about manga I normally do so without fear. After all, it doesn’t matter what I say, I’ll step on someone’s toes. But it’s not often that I find myself on the precipice of writing something that I know will piss off pretty much every manga fan online. But I am committed, so here I go.

I didn’t think this bonus story was very good.

Besides the fact that Toriyama’s art looks strange coming back to Dragon Ball after such a long time, all the characters look oddly proportioned, too skinny I might say. It was really neat to find out what Planet Vegeta looked like before it blew up (though it reminds me a lot of Namek, and earth for that matter with how Toriyama draws them). I think everyone can agree that Goku’s mom looks like nothing we imagined, and in general this was a fun little experience.

The problem is that it’s impossible not to draw comparisons between this little chapter and a very famous story relating to a comics icon. Almost beat for beat this is the origin story for Superman. Planet about to be destroyed, father called it, sends son away. I’d always imagined Goku was legitimately on a mission to destroy earth, not sent away to save his life, and that would have been a perfectly fine story. This version works in that it lines up with everything Toriyama wrote in the past about it. But at the same time the similarities are so close that I can’t help but wonder why no effort was made to avoid the comparisons?

It’s a fun little chapter, but anyone with a passing knowledge of western comics will more more than a little distracted while reading it.

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